I plan on revising my 1st essay which is about  advertising. I have chosen to expand this essay because my supporting claims were too general and didn't get my point across clearly enough. To expand my essay I will change my claim because I now realize how much advertisements have changed. I will be comparing the men's men, men's women and etc... Categories to the new advertisements being broadcasted. I will show how advertisements have changed and that the men's men, men's women and etc. categories don't necessarily depict modern advertisements.

I have recently started to think more about the categorizing of advertisements and have also been watching television more and have come to the conclusion that the categorizing method isn't accurate enough. That's why I am going to change my claim on it and will not only be describing contradictory ads. But am also going to depict key events as to why this is and how I think the future of advertising will be like.